Belly Aching

Signs of chronic belly aching include intense stomach pain cause by excessive complaining.

What started off as a very abusive relationship, turned out to be my 2nd favorite piece in my thesis. I struggled for like 2 weeks on this one, but thanks to my friends and classmates I was able to turn it around and make it work. THANK YOU! I'm honestly quite happy with the way this turned out. I've been experimenting with different colour combinations all semester not only for my thesis, but in my painting class as well, and I think I'm liking the results :D

Do you think the hand closest the stomach jumps out a bit? I'm trying to show the "aching" portion of the phrase with the tense hand gesture, but do you think it needs to be less obvious?